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You have a good idea. I feel like I am not in the story. I am suggesting that you try to show instead of telling what characters are doing. here is websitehttp://***.wright.edu/~david.wilson/eng3830/creativewriting101.pdf
I swear to goddess of explosion, Megumin - sama that I had read this before but as webtoon...I forgot the title but the mc also stuck inside tutorial place for a long time until he can't even uplvl in next world because his lvl is low but exp and stat is flying off the roof...But this is bad. I remember that the webtoon is quite interesting but this one is.. Hurm...
A very fun and interesting take on the usual "Lord Game" format that many chinese webnovels use, for once the MC is not rash, racist or stupidly overpowered and not everything goes according to plan, forcing the MC to adapt and overcome the obstacles with creative solutions rather than just luckily finnding a skill or item that would just perfectly solve his problems. My only complaint would be the intelligence level of all the young masters in this novel so far, it makes me doubt they are capable of tying shoelaces without help.
Just read the first page and I was forced to give a review the story line is so cleanly writing that you would not notice it an orginal novel, the flow of the story keeps you tuned in. worth reading, really goodkeep up the good work want to see your world come to life in the minds of more readers
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