Beauty omega devil

Great story. Highly recommended.

Flora est la fille de Norman, le champion de l'arène de Clémenti-Ville, et la grande sœur de Max. Elle remplace Ondine durant les saisons 6, 7, 8 et 9 et elle est la première héroïne coordinatrice du groupe de Sacha.Elle a une chanson thématique intitulée « I will not be Defeated! » qui montre bien sa personnalité par rapport au dessin animé.

I think this story has a lot of potential. Key points to look out for:1) use of dialogue, think you could Make use of more dialogue. the entire story is written in Lincolns thoughts with sparse use of dialogue. 2) character development: The story is too focused on Physical development and has ignored much of lincolns mental development3) world sEtting: the entire transition to rocks Pirates, the worlD government, strength levels are not too clear Even with the auxiliary chapter4) Story pace: reading just the first few chapters, it Already the gives the feeling that the story will end in 10-15 chapters max.  You want to make sure you have a modest goal in terms of how long this fanfic will be and pace yourself to achieve that goal

As always, I haven't read this novel so here goes some neutral rating of 3 stars! As soon as I saw the synopsis, I knew that I'll be adding this to my library. Hahaha even insects brought him experience points and item drops? What's next? That's what I wanted to find out. So I'm gonna give you my vote! 😉

I love this book!!! Great start and a wonderful character design, I love the idea of there always being sumbuddy stronger than the Mc. great Mc, smart mc

Here to gain the five experience points for reviewing :) A short review/summary however:It's New Year's Eve, and while everyone looks forward to change for the better, a greedy old man, Sakim is on his way to die. As the fireworks erupt, so comes his death... but, like any protagonist, he is reincarnated into a new world!His greed affects the System he receives, which in turns allows him to steal whatsoever his heart desires—but he needs to overcome this! He already died before unsatisfied despite gaining wealth and power on earth, so he needs to change! ( At least that's what the Witch told him to do, but can he really change? )Old habits die hard.Too early to say, but looking forward to a good execution of the 'Vitality' focus in this book. I adored Shield Hero's Defense stat and Naofumi's ability to think on his feet, finding an ally for the offensive power... but I don't think that's what our protagonist is going to do.I can imagine him powering up fast and taking advantage of 'Vitality' stat. Well, you can't expect that much from a greedy protagonist xD However, if you're into stats, litrpg and the familiar tropes, then maybe you'll enjoy this book!

I think it's an interesting story, I'll wait for the next chapters.

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