Barbarian’s Dark Fantasy Strategy Guide

First half was good but then the author became lazy. After the built up there was a unnecessary time jump, the bud 'guy' became so unhinged that it's motive didn't make sense, the both leads became shallow and dumb. Too bad; the 2nd half was rushed and un- inspired. Pity..

Excellent story with so many unexpected twists - you really can’t predict this - amazing writing.

great story...should be made into an anime lol

Very good, i rate this 9.5

It's really fantastic and uncommon.
  I can testify it's not the usual we read everyday.
keep it up!