Story for the first eleven chapters was pretty good. Minor grammatical errors aside, it was pretty solid.Story immediately fell off after chapter 12. Main character is revealed to be a busybody that will endanger his own life for someone he has never met before. Main character can literally practice martial arts and cultivate, but instead he gets into random street fights with gangsters while simping over some random girl. Before that fight happened, he paid for multiple meals of a girl from his class, costing a lot of his money. I find it astounding considering she probably makes more than he does. Also, I'm getting sick and tired of the love at first sight cliche, it's such a lazy way of having romance.World background is decent, nothing terrible, but nothing good either. I can't remember if they introduced the country or not. Overall, it was going good, but it's readily apparently the main character is not going to have any intelligence throughout the novel, and is going to kill himself trying to get a harem as fast as possible.
I would presume, like many, I'm here because I stumbled across the anime and just had to have more. Because this story is addictive, and it is such because it's good. Beyond good, it is outstanding. Amazing. Brilliant. Asonishingly well-developed, well-paced, well-characterised, well-written story. I've read 662 chapters so far, and it just keeps getting better.The translator has my utmost respect. I know nothing about the Chinese language, and without their wonderful efforts, such a tale would have tragically flown over my head, and I would presume many of the other readers' too. It's remarkable how the chapters get updated at a steady, daily rate. I thank them greatly.It's a good idea to be aware for native English speakers such as myself, that it can be somewhat challenging for the brain to comprehend at times, particularly at first. The gramatical errors are there in every chapter, and the sentence and paragraph structure may appear a little odd, but with practise and determination these minor details don't matter a single bit. After all, it's the content that we're here for. And the content is truly worth it.It took an entire week of reading from dawn till dusk (roughly) to get to here so far, and I'm eargerly looking forward to the next chapter.I'm only worried about the MCs health, honestly, with how much he smokes he's got to be looking for an early death. Oh well. xD
This book is amazing! Never have I ever read a book that is staying so true to its synopsis and the promises made to the readers. Also the updates are incredible stable with one chapter every day without missing one!Author-san keep it up!
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I've scanned through this, I like the way it's looking, pinned it to my library, and will give a detailed comment after reading.πππππππππππ
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Overall one of the best web novels I have ever read. I cant wait to get coins to unlock those hidden juciy chapters. I do want to say that on... sibbles (I think thats the site name), that there are chapters avalible for free that are paywalled here ( just saying)
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