Job well done so far! Eagerly waiting for more updates... The story flow is smooth and the characters are designed well. This novel has great potential! Good work author! Cheers!!
Cool... Female Lead... Definitely Cool...
First of all this is my second or third time reading a female lead.. but now I'm started to think female leads are way cooler.. I don't know maybe it's because I'm bored of reading male lead or something ... in them... everything is like it's obviously going to happen but female leads are like... "hmmmm... cool... kick his a**"....
So about this work, it's interesting you have a princess and her family murder case and then [spoiler. Nahh..go read it yourself and find out]..
Secondly about the grammatical errors and all... there are but not that many to break your flow of reading...you can enjoy it.
Lastly.. it's a good work... everyone should try it... and thanks author for his hard work.
I am completely fascinated by the story specially the author descriptive of surrounding and the world setting keep up the good work .
The story plot is one more redeeming point which O liked the most
The storylines are good!! I find the story entertaining to me. But, I do saw a few sentences and lines that can be fixed.
I will talk about the summary first. You can use your own idea if you want. I only give you a suggestion. (I'm not that pro myself)
" On the day of her Coronation, rebels from the enemies sect appeared. Of course, as a skilled Dragon warrior, she had nothing to worry about.
That was it until she realized the bitter truth. She was poisoned!!!"
Damn.. I don't even know what I did is right or not..😂😂
I don't see any mistake anywhere aside from you need to search for more suitable synonym for some words in your novel. That's all!!ᕙ(＠°▽°＠)ᕗ Work hard and don't give up!!
I love the way the father-daughter bond was presented in the first chapter, it was really sweet. The Princess is a really strong character physically and emotionally. It's great to see that she has a fun and childish side too! This is truly a deep and fascinating story. Please keep up the brilliant work Author!
Seems nice, female lead is strong-willed. Very rare in your plot seems most other novels are like "I went back 300 years ago just to know the past". While yours be like ey, let's smack down to 8 years.
Anyway this is good. Nothing much to say, well done
This novel is pretty good, I haven’t found many problems.
The flow and writing style is pretty amazing, I am not really a fan of female lead books.
But for my friend I’ll read it.
Keep up the good work 👍
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Happy writing!
First of all this is my second or third time reading a female lead.. but now I'm started to think female leads are way cooler.. I don't know maybe it's because I'm bored of reading male lead or something ... in them... everything is like it's obviously going to happen but female leads are like... "hmmmm... cool... kick his a**"....
So about this work, it's interesting you have a princess and her family murder case and then [spoiler. Nahh..go read it yourself and find out]..
Secondly about the grammatical errors and all... there are but not that many to break your flow of reading...you can enjoy it.
Lastly.. it's a good work... everyone should try it... and thanks author for his hard work.
The story plot is one more redeeming point which O liked the most
I will talk about the summary first. You can use your own idea if you want. I only give you a suggestion. (I'm not that pro myself)
" On the day of her Coronation, rebels from the enemies sect appeared. Of course, as a skilled Dragon warrior, she had nothing to worry about.
That was it until she realized the bitter truth. She was poisoned!!!"
Damn.. I don't even know what I did is right or not..😂😂
I don't see any mistake anywhere aside from you need to search for more suitable synonym for some words in your novel. That's all!!ᕙ(＠°▽°＠)ᕗ Work hard and don't give up!!
Anyway this is good. Nothing much to say, well done
Tada. (っ.❛ ᴗ ❛.)っ
The flow and writing style is pretty amazing, I am not really a fan of female lead books.
But for my friend I’ll read it.
Keep up the good work 👍