Awakening of the Magic: Beginning

I love the story because from world background to character design even story development everything is unique author create everything himself that why I like this story

I'm not going to lie this is a pretty new novel so I don't know how could it's going to get, it even might get worse. but at the moment it's Peak!

HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM...................a type of novel where every cliches get mix up BUT!!!! with good execution and not so fast pace

I love my Isekai; However, this was totally different from the norm, the author portrays the story in such a way that you're drawn in and before you know it you're already reading the next chapter! The writing quality was excellent! The sentence structure was top notch and the wording is easy to understand. They're also talented with imagery which made the chapters captivating and fun to read. Despite me not knowing much about Ren or Adelaide yet I love them so freaking much! Giving the reader little to no information about a character is a great way to draw them in as they're willing to fill in the blanks.Conclusion: A talented writer with a twist on the Isekai genre. I can't wait to read more and I'll definitely be looking out for the next chapter.

Your book has great description and excellent verbiage. However, it lacks substance. Each chapter has so much exposition casually explained that it feels forced.Ch2 is Silas talking, demonstrating his magic to no one.Ch3 is talking, establishing Silas' overcautious nature and Saya being forward.Ch4 +2 characters, more talking.Ch5 is talking and more magic exposition.Almost nothing substantial happens, Author.Compare this to the prologue. Terrified scientist goes teleports 8 bodies away. Baddie shows up, taunts him and beats him. There is suspense, strong emotion, and extreme actions of a desperate spellcasting and a villainess beating a defenseless person.I advise you hold off on providing so much exposition, so many characters. Give us 1 or 2 and provide an active conflict where you can demonstrate their abilities, their personalities, their goals and motivations.As a reader, I'd prefer to discover exposition than be told. Instead of 'all the humans are dead' I'd rather hear Huxley's tortured screams, full of rage and despair, cursing Leviathan for her and her people's cruel genocide. The characters' abilities could be revealed in action scenes instead of briefly explained.World events can be conveyed through character conversation, like you did with the ferals. Also, Silas has no personality except that he's distrustful and hides from girls.Thanks for writing. I hope my relatively harsh review won't dissuade you from continuing as a writer. You have some very cool, I daresay "novel" concepts that have a lot of potential. I look forward to your growth. Let's work hard together, Author.

Great novel. The story is going smoothly and the author does seem to know his stuff. Keep up the good work. I will support your novel just don't drop it.

Mira Sam POV

"tell me something no one else noes but myself "