Fantastic story and very interesting. I like the uniqueness of this monster training where the monster and the human fuse together and through this give bonuses to each other. This is a bit of a slower story. This is not a story that goes from being and ant to the ruler of the world in less than 150 chapters. I highly suggest reading it and bearing with the small editing issues that they author has at the start of the LN. He does start to get better at it around chapter 20 and then gets an editor to start editing it at about chapter 36. After that the editing gets really good.
The chapters are long. The grammar is good, with little to no mistake, but there is something always missing in each chapter. Basically, even though there is a lot things of happening on the chapter, I always feel it's quite boring. IDK if it's just me(?) or maybe I am just burnt out.
Chapter 40 loving the progress however it’ s a shame we have to wait for future chapters to be released daily the author done a fantastic job on this novel so far
honestly pretty good so far, the writing and grammer is excellent. I'll keep reading cause it's got an interesting plot. it is going to be interesting how you balance real life/game time because people need to work and eat. if you go offline for a few hours then days will go by
Pro: Good grammar, writing quality is very good compared to other novel’s on the site. Con: idot mc. He chooses not to Increase his stats using the system even after being nearly killed multiple times. Granted he does end up using them but he chose to remain weak for a very long time. I do understand having the mc be stupid, Naive, or weak but he has had multiple wake up calls and refuses to answer them. Pro: world design is very good. Especially with the way its shrouded in mystery and everything isnt given to you upfront like many novels on this siteCon: thus far side character development has sucked im beginning to wonder why they are even there. I digress im not fully caught up on chaps but thus far instead of caring about characters I either wish for their deaths, especially Erik, Or i’m just plain indefferent about their wellbeing.Pro: despite his shortcomings MC seems human which i really enjoy and some of his actions actually make sense which I really enjoyThese are my thoughts thus far and I do apologize if the spelling sucks WN turns of autocorrect on my phone.If anyone thinks in wrong about any of these feel free to reply
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