Ashes of an oath

Amazing story. The most unique thing about this story is that it is written by a Pakistani and written in Pakistani style. Good luck author in writing more novels in future

'Wow, it felt different when you experience it yourself.' (Melissa)

"Uuugh, I guess it's time to wake up, come on Nemo get up." Akito got ready for work while Nemo was waiting for his food to be served. Once Akito was ready he started making dinner while listening to the song on the radio and dancing around at the same time. They both ate their breakfast and relaxed on the couch for a bit, since he had time to spare. After some time passed it was already 7:00 and Akito had to be at work at 7:30 so he had to get going. "Well Nemo looks like I have to go now, make sure you behave while I'm gone" said Akito while he grabbed his camera and put on his shoes. "Bye Nemo

Good pacing, storyline and worldbuilding. I really like it

Your novel has potential, though there are only 7 chapters for now, I hope you can upload more soon, I would definitely recommend it to anyone.....

Keep Up The Good Works. I'm Fascinated By The World Building .... Especially The Ability To Jump Between Worlds After Death. Tasty.