Overall its good the story developed in a good way but the way he train is just insane and it feelLike he would be a pro already but I know that its a fantasy ich novel so it just bugging me and I dont mind it that much. I know people commented on the grammar but it really suck and I knew it is hard to write english too cuz English my second language. Like I get the overall sentence and stuff cuz I read google translation chinese novel. It just need a bit of editing sentence strcuture and it will be good, so if you trust me I would like to edit your work for you.
Author will you still write this story? it's good please don't stop, just ignore the people who always comment about the system. Clearly they haven't read the synopsis
This Novel's much better than I thought, I don't know why this has such low views while the other books with lower standard have such high views.I want this to get chosen by Webnovel.
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" Fuck... " Liam groaned as an unidentifiable head lay next to his. The pain from the landing was numbed by the fright and adrenaline that coursed through his veins.
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