Ascension of the Williams

Not a bad story but profoundly stupid. Writing/translation/editing are good and its easy and enjoyable to read but the author has crammed every cliche in the story. MC is a scrawny nobody hat even flies wouldnt **** on but his 1337 gaming skills make him the terminator in real life. Men LITERALLY faint in fear when they see how awesome he is and women are so wet they need a diaper to go in public. On top of that I doubt the author played a single MMO in his life. MC is a melee fighter with no healing ability yet he constantly soloes high level elites. How? He never gets hit during battles since he put a few points in agility. He is a reincarnator who developed a major guild and knew a lot of great players. Does he develop a great team and do dungeons with them? No, only invites his old friend to join him and then we dont hear from that old friend in the next 80 chapters. Then we have the game economy. Its retarded. Guilds are giving millions irl to recruit players but their ingame worth is only a gold coin or two. Yet when MC sells a bunch of gold coins for real money he can only afford to buy some food before running out of money. MC knows where a bunch of valuable chests and locations are but does he go around collecting amazing stuff? No, he spends his gametime in the city zone leveling his crafting. Don't get me wrong. The story is enjoyable to read. But its so, so, SO damn stupid at times that couldn't help noticing and had to write a few words about it. Look at "The thief who roamed the world" for how to do this properly. Or Zhan Long is also quite good.

I like villain stories, too bad they aren't popular on this site.I only know one other story with a villain protagonist as evil, and that's Gu Master (aka Reverend Insanity).

Ok so for translation quality and update stability they both get a high score as Cktalon is a beast in those areas, next story development, this story started nice and got drowned into its own fillers people don't realize it when they read bulks of chapters but when you read slowly you realize the author is just trying to milk it and add a lot of unnecessary things, pointless interactions and fodders.Character Design : as in alot of other CN's the characters are bland and lack realism and life overall it seem they are just puppets that present us the show.World Background : Meh, author tried a replica of Perfect World at the start but he lack the imagination of Chen Dong and his eloquence in describing his world, it end up looking like a game path where mc has to go from area A to area B in full boost without caring about neither of those areas in depth.

the story is not bad, very entertaining.the story is not bad, very entertaining.the story is not bad, very entertaining.the story is not bad, very entertaining.

Kudos to the author! I have fun reading and so far so good! I only found few grammatical errors but didn't mind it. Still the author made his narration fun so it will be enjoyable. The chapter was still few but I know that it has potential in the future. And again, thank you for making a wonderful novel for me to read!

It is strange that you use powerful jewels in your novel, I think that you are innately smart because you do not need to take ideas from the anime, you are wonderful using your mind to entertain us with your wonderful novel

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Shaping up to be a good story. Don't let any mean comments get you down as you continue to write. Over time, everything will fall into place. My only advice is trying to not make the MC too overpowered too fast, or the side characters too mindless or uninteresting.All in all, keep up the good work 👍