The story started off good, but around chapter 30 or so things started to get a bit annoying.The MC doesnt show any kind of wisdom that would match a 100 year old man who raised children and grandchildren.At around chapter 38-43 things just became so much worse. MC makes a pill that is like viagra on steroids, and is somehow completely oblivious to others reactions to it, and is exceedingly vague whenever talking about it to others.Having characters taking a pill, which they expect to strengthen them, only for it to be an extreme aphrodisiac is not my kind of humor at all. I am pretty sure that kind of stuff is illegal to an insane degree in many places because of how cruel and harmful it is, but in the story its supposed to be funny.
Absolutely perfect novel! I can't say that I've had a better time reading before this novel! And to Elawn aka The Author, I don't know why you haven't been able to work on such a splendid novel after almost 3 years! But, I hope you are happy and healthy! If you ever have a chance in the future it would mean the world to a lot of people if you could continue on with this! -Anyways, thank you for all you've done!
Its good so far but it kinda sucks that Mas(the MC) is completely reliant on the system and doesn't even try to learn alchemy properly. What if the sytem goes offline in the future during a time where he urgently needs it? Plus since the process happens in an instant inside the system if he ever takes on a disiple its not like he could show or guide them through the process of creating something. The only thing he could do is rely on the system to provide a recipe and show off the final product.
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