If not for the update rates, i will give this five star review.I love this novel, 5/5. It has an interesting world, good pacing and a main character I really like. I think the thing I like the most about the novel is that though the MC decision and a more tend to alpha male, they are still somewhat realistic and consistent with the established personality of the MC.
soo hard to read.. it's all over the place.. concepts aren't really clear.. MC suddenly gets a sniper rifle and it's not clear how he got it.. some people are saying in comments that he went abroad n used his personal space to get it.. but there's no mention of it at all..One guy is killed in the game n when he's out he's driving his car all of a sudden.. and he immediately re-enters the game still driving.. how did he end up driving the car when he was in the game? or does the car detect he's in a game n drives itself? nothing mentioned.. there's no time stop or something n user has to wear a vr helmet to play n all.. there's other stuff like mc walks into a gym to test this strength.. coach seeing his form is wrong corrects it.. seeing MC is strong he immediately asks if he wants to become a coach.. even though all he got is strength.. MC rejects it.. n that's it.. nothing else.. only reason I can imagine why the author wrote those 3-4 paras is to make fun of other novels where MC does join a gym which is kinda stupid..Real world is even more ambiguous.. MC enters the game at night n is out by morning.. what does he do during the daytime? go to work? go to college? nothing.. he eats meat from the game.. exercises.. re enters the game.. all I can get from this is that MC takes an entire day to eat n go for a run..MC goes to his village all of a sudden to defeat his friend/neighbour as he became stronger.. then that friend guards his house when MC is playing the game.. nothing else..Basically everything is all over the place.. written very poorly.. n half done.. upon that translation is really bad making it even harder to read.. overall it's simply unpleasant to read.. a complete waste of time
Fantastic novel all around. Probably the best pure mmorpg novel i've read. It takes everything from novels like Strongest sword god, great thief and virtually every other mmorpg based novel and does everything better.
You are making story way worse by trying so hard.There is a good reason for so many similar novels to exist, because it works! Your starting template is similar to 'global lord' types, yet instead of following the fast paced formula, you write an extremely slow paced progression, which doesn't fit this sub-genre at all.Literally whenever ANYTHING happens, MC starts thinking about it for ungodly amount og paragraphs. Then he says something like "wait this is not important now
Few chapters yet i am hooked in this story already! The ancient times value the strength of the man but this story is different. I will follow the adventure of the two swordswomen.
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