''So, what can be done Hermes? What did Zeus tell you to do specifically? Just tell me, and I'll do whatever I can to help.'' Hestia spoke causing the messenger God to glance her way before giving
Writing quality one star: Seems like after the first couple chapters the translation turns absolutely abysmal. Every line is separated and the grammar is horrible. Worse than standard mtl.Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting.Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though.Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day.World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology?Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star
Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?
It really is a good book, but it would feel nice if the readers could get to know about the name of the beasts and get to see the characters(especially the male and female leads and the beasts of the MC). But overall I think it is good but it needs to be updated with the above details ASAP.Keep up the good work All the best!!👍
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