As a father, I just want to quietly watch you live a long life

Shit's peak not gon lie. Workrate's mad hard too, you'd swear bro's locked in a basement😂 Author blink 10 times for an SOS😂Truly loving every minute of this book, there aren't any annoying cliches which is already a win in my book.The story just flows seamlessly.The Author just knows how to write, the story draws you in pretty well.You got a crashout FL who's not annoying and is actually likable. The romance and interaction between the two is a nice.The story is developing pretty well, the characters are well written, the world building is also coming along pretty nice, isn't rushed or anything, and it blends in pretty well as the story is progressing.The MC isn't overly emotional and stiff, he's anMC who's actually fun to follow. A smart MC. I have nothing to complain about.Overall great.

This novel hits hard. It opens with Devon reminiscing about the good old days hammocks, flower beds, and Sophie’s first kiss. It’s this warm, nostalgic setup that contrasts beautifully with the chaos that follows. You nailed the emotional shift, from longing for peace to the brutal reality of what Devon’s facing.The sibling dynamic? Pure gold. Devon and Kisho’s banter felt alive, their bond grounding the chapter with humor before the trial. That ear yank? Chef’s kiss. It’s playful and light, making what happens next hit even harder.Then the trial starts, and it’s a gut punch. Devon’s desperation, his raw anger, and the betrayal he feels from the villagers are so visceral. The way he fakes his way through magic? Genius. You’re rooting for him, even knowing it’s not going to end well.And when the father reveals his true colors? Chilling. His sanctimonious speech, the crowd’s roar, and Devon’s brief triumph with magic all build perfectly to that brutal twist. His death and transformation into the abyss felt like a tidal wave of anger and raw power. Devon’s vow for revenge? Goosebumps.Kisho’s a tsun tsun Brocon, but his relationship with Devon adds so much to the emotional weight. Jideva’s ominous twist at the end seals it. The question of whether Devon will rise above his hatred or become consumed by it is the perfect hook.

The plot is pretty good, its like that anime I watched before where she summoned a demon too. But I noticed that the story revolves only at the 2 characters, and i don't still have a clue on what are the goals of the demon or the boy... or maybe because its still at chapter 7. anyways the plot and story is interesting

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

Grandmother - Is Ice fine now?

Hestia's eyes flashed cyan as she stared directly into Hermes own orbs and spoke. "I will do this, but if this, at all, backfires, friend or not Hermes, I will kill you. Do you understand?" she said

*WHOOSH* *WHOOSH*

As soon as I register what happened, I claw her off of me and say "Who the hell are you?" She responds with "David, don't you remember me?" I turn to Rose and ask her "Is this sort of joke normal for your work friend?"