Arrow Through my Decaying Heart

So I've read till the latest chapter and after everything I've read so far I can say even after adding 100 sp to int and wis he's like a smart clown that only knows how to perform magic. You said I have mastered the eyes of truth where were those eyes when fighting that Huntress? Another thing how can something that has been given by the absolute being can be muted or whatever you call it. Is he so stupid to keep talking to the enemy while he's fighting. He's way arrogant for someone who's just a tool or slave of the world. I'll do this to humanity I'll do that to humanity so much for losing out of stupidity and getting sealed. Is he not an incubus can he not steal the life force of the enemy like how she's stealing his?

The first 60 chapters were nothing but constant exposition. It's one thing to introduce the world it's another thing to continue explaining everything every single chapter. Nothing notable so far just standard for the genre.

"I'm going bananas—!"This is a very exciting novel that I've just seen in the New Rankings, and I can already say that I'm looking forward to seeing the MC get his banana farm and churn out the money! Honestly love the Monkey King, and seeing a novel inspired from it has made me extremely happy.And we can see that it's Sixth who wrote it, so one can confidently say that this will not be dropped and will be updated regularly. I expect a lot of good things, and I'm really going bananas over it.And I can see that there will be several girls who'll be hunting for his *ahem* banana ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ohoho!Exciting premise for me (5) Stable Updates (5) and though it's a little too early to say, but from what I've already read... I'll give the others, 5 stars as well! The MC tends to be a fill-in for the readers, so the background of theirs is relatable. Poor family? Struggling? (5) The development is of course an upward trajectory, which we all want so I give this five as well! (5) The Rising of the Monkey God! Surely, a VR that allows you to run a Banana Farm is already pretty dang amazing for me! T^T Banana farm. Banana farm. All I want is a banana farm, Author!Get my 5stars~!

Shameless newbie author here! This is my first time writing a novel. I'm really enjoying the process of creating this story and really hope y'all enjoy it as well. Feedback is most definitely appreciated, be easy on me though it's my first novel. I will definitely implement ideas you guys have and whatever feedback you leave. For right now, I will upload 2 chapters. Hopefully in the future I can pump out more chapters while still keeping the quality perfect! Again, thank you for reading and hope you enjoy!!!

started reading it,let's see how far her revenge goes.

okay author dont be greedy and update regularly rather than updating it in the privilage section or the audience will lose their interest.

Shameless review from the author here. This is a mix of sci-fi, superpowers and magic in a way I haven't seen before. Nice pacing, plot and character development. This is all original, which makes it even better. a 5/5.

Arya turned quiet and reflected on the points mentioned by her father and then said "Yes, I understood. The intent with a virtuous act will help create spiritual energy of virtue. I got it now. Intents generated form the soul might use some soul power but once the action is executed, the soul power received by gratitude, respect, and veneration can fulfil the shortage made in soul power. Haha. The same way intent created by worldly emotions can also help us strengthen the soul and that is a way of worldly mortal beings to move toward being a yogi."