This story deserves 5 stars.Writing is good, no bad grammars. It is neat and cool story that deserves more outreach*love* *love* *love* *love* *love* *love*
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The character design is quite bad, for example when did magikarp become a gyarados and when did he catch a litten. The story development also needs work, you need to slow down a little and show him bonding with his pokemon.
i just came here to randomly support the authorπ.the book is worth the read, you guys should give it a try as well. although there are some grammatical error but still ist worthy.More chapter please!
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