Amazing! The premise is intruiging and makes me want to read more chapters. Although the trope of getting kicked out of your party isn‘t that rare, I do not consider this to be negative. There were definitly some funny moments which were entertaining to read. The synopsis is a tad bit too long but maybe thats just my opinion. It was well written and overall a good story that I will be looking forward too.
I really like this story so far. That take on the system genre is really unique, and I just really enjoy the atmosphere and characters. I really like Albrecht, he feels really relatable, and I really love those few moments of the comedic undertone. It's just very enjoyable all in all. I also love how the worldbuilding is slow and gradual, leaving that mystery but not dumping everything at you at once, it takes the 'show don't tell' route.
The writing quality is just a bonus really. Nearly no mistakes in the grammar or whatsoever, and the paragraph structure is smooth and lets you have an easy read-through and through. I really enjoyed this story, and I definitely am going to continue reading it.
At the first chapter I feel like there is no special feeling to this story and in the second chapter I feel like WoW this is great.also, since the first chapter I can see that you have a lot potential in writing because your writing skill is so good.
chapter one is real good. And the cliffhanger at the end of the chp. You can already fell that the ex team mates are gonna come back to beg him back. Like those amines whereby the weakest leave the group and comes back overpowered. Real good man!
I REALLY LOVE SYSTEM GENRES BUT ROMANCE NOT SO MUCH BUT THIS NOVEL REALLY HOOKED ME UP, EVERYTHING HAVE READ SO FAR SO FAR IS OF GOOD QUALITY , CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. GOOD JOB AUTHOR
Amazing story so far. The story itself is well-written, and while the writing quality could be worked on, the grammar is nigh immaculate. The first incident isn't really unique, but the author does a good job portraying it as such.
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The writing quality is just a bonus really. Nearly no mistakes in the grammar or whatsoever, and the paragraph structure is smooth and lets you have an easy read-through and through. I really enjoyed this story, and I definitely am going to continue reading it.
All in all, 5/5, worth your time.
Keep up the good work, author!