AQUARIUS: The prince of light

The story plot is captivating,  so is the book cover. I can tell the story is going to be interesting from just the first chapter I've read. Keep up the good work, author!

I started reading this because the ratings were rather high. I’m sad to say but after 70 chapters, I am disappointed. Writing Quality:I know that the writer is not native to English and there is a certain allotment for this, but I still find the vocabulary to be quite poor.Stability of Updates:I started reading this after 70 chapters were already released but looking at the update times, its somewhat unreliable. Story Development:In my opinion, instead of the all-around system, it’s better to call this the wish system. Why? Because every time there’s conflict or even a bit of a challenge added, the system comes up with a solution. This is the case for even the most inconveniences that comes up for the MC. Some examples are, his level being too low? Solution: magic fruit. Can’t find more fruit? Solution: magic radar. Can’t store all the fruit gathered? Solution: infinite storage. Runs into a strong enemy? Solution: systems upgrades, and he easily crushes the enemies. About to be raped? Solution: magically can use portals to escape. Gets molested by a beauty? His only weakness is cured, and he even powers up.Character Design:All of the characters are rather hollow. Every female is a beauty and every male is ugly except for the MC who is as pretty as the other females. Basically, he’s a trap character.World Background:Some of the background of the universe has been revealed but it was more of an information dump after the MC is “cured”. Instead of having the MC gather info as he progresses, the best way to reveal this information is during pillow talk time it seems.  All of this can be summarized as “needs work”.

As the first reviewer it's my responsibility to tell all of you that it is a "SYSTEM" NOVEL!!!!!!*coughs proudly in front of mere mortals who will never get a system in their life**Bows*

it's good, really enjoyable story and character act like actual people. would recommend.....................................................

Thank you very much for this guide. It helped a lot and has many practical instructions. I hope you increase the update rate since a lot of us are currently writing our novels and need this as soon as possible. There are certain topics I hope you'd address in the next chapters. One problem that is bugging me is how can I do plot twist, I hope that my novel is different from the average one and I don't want it to be like the reader would expect. I also have a problem with the number of arcs in the story. I made a basic outline for the whole plot and feel that my novel is too short. Should I add some side stories?

Hey WebNovel, how about finishing all the existing stories you picked up earlier, before you start translating new novels. In the last year you dropped like 5 or 6 popular novels which were completed for 50-70%Seriously, whats the point for me to buy premium for this novel or other, if in the end you are going to drop it midway? I'd much more prefer if I can get 6 chapters daily from one novel, instead of 2 chapters from 3 novels. I'd even pay some money since its that what you are after, but like don't even think about getting a dolla from me before you pick up the novels you dropped and finished the existing translations. But if you still try to take new novels, at least pick up something good. Or else you will loose majority of your readers. You will not get any profit like this, c'mon, WebNovel dawg, you can get 1 dollar from 100000 average readers or 10 dollars from 100 rich readers, its obvious which is more profitable. You get my idea, right?Guys please like this comment so that webnovel will hopefully see it and finish the existing translations ASAP before switching to new books.

I dont see any negative reviews so i suppose this will no be here long. I hava a lot of issues with this one... First is wording in sentences, additional words and explanation of poitless facts over and over again. Next is the story, i got to chap 80 and I am so bored with all the pointlessnes of MC actions and his logic, i thought that if he was a gang member he would be resourcefull if not smat but, but he is just swayed by any little thing and every decision is made by others. There are no feeling and depresion as author advertised... Just a cliche fantasy with nothing new. Only positive is side characters but that cannot save whole book. I hoped for something in there but got only boredom and bad english.

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