Apocalyptic: My Killing System Is Too Overpowered!

how much longer is this book going to be

This story is lit! With a talented author, this novel was in good hands. I gotta say I'm impressed! Accompanied with hard work and perseverance, this will pave well in the future! Good luck author and may your novel be blessed with more readers!

Great start! Can’t wait to read some more. looked into the the deeper meaning of their names...saya/sahayaka=happy and molasi=strength. The names itself may show the overall character development of the story.

Well. First things first, the grammar could use some work. It is readable, although I can't deny that it hurts my eyes and this is coming from a brasilian writer who also struggles with english grammar! The main plot also seems to be initially just your everyday typical VR novel although it quickly switched to the stereotype reincarnation with a system. The MC just seems to be one of those dumbasses and probably he is gonna end up just like those clichê protagonists. For the good points, although the grammar is pretty bad I can't say it's the worst I've ever seen since I saw things that could make anyone feel the desire to drink bleach and put clorox on their eyes, so congrats because your novel is nowhere near close those garbages. Despite this story being quite my cup of tea I can say this author has a lot of potential for future growth so I'm looking forward to your future stories. Everyone needs to start somewhere, even the first chapters of my first novel are also pretty bad.Sorry for being harsh on the review but I decided to be honest here, it is going to surely help you in the future.

One of my favourite (the title is pretty wrong tho)

Amazing storylineOutstanding character design

'Alex Open Status.'

A rifle points behind his head. He turned around slowly.