1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled(Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
It has a concept similar to The World Online and even almost the same name, but it is very different, different gameplay. I liked it a lot, I hope more, I found some small bugs, but nothing that makes me go down to 4 stars, could there be zombie players in the future? By being infected while connected and the zombie's mind would still stay connected.
I like the story. The more you read, the more you'll get interested. MC And FMC has a whole different backgrounds. It's not like regular novel or something. It's quite unique.
That futanari introduction was just stupid. I think the author purposefully wanted to nuke this book because how the hell can you start out so well to end up at an army of futanari out of nowhere
I have read a lot of novels with bad grammar, but not once in my life have I ever seen a novel with this bad of grammar. I mean, everyone paragraph has multiple grammatical errors that makes it hard to understand. The plot for this novel is, in my opinion, very good, it also has a ton of potential, but not under this current author. I understand that the author is probably new to writing novels, but at least try to appear as though you actually cared about the quality of your novel. The characters are ok at best, but most of the time they are just not interesting, they don't feel unique. The main character is kind of funny at some times, but that's the best I can say for the MC. The only pro to this story is that he regularly updates it. Overall this novel is pretty bad, not because of the plot, but because of the author. Alright alright, I'm done ranting, but it's kind of frustrating when you see a novel that has so much potential but is then ruined by the actual writing of the story. So to conclude this rant, I would say read this only if you don't care about grammatical errors and if you don't care about most of the characters being, well, 'normal'.
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