Apocalypse: I Awakened An SSS-Ranked Villan System In A Filthy World

Calm down and add depth to the story, good plot though, personally i feel you are free riding the story, give it depth a make it relate-able, especially the part of the female individual been raped

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Only the synopsis and already he and she are interchangeable. It would be foolish to take this seriously when even the TL doesn't.

It's an interesting story.I especially enjoyed the competition between 'Young Masters'.Although the translation sometimes leaves on feeling frustrated over the flow of the story it does meet the passing standard.

Honestly I liked the first few chapters. After that its just keeps going down until chapter 18 when it became unreadable. After that I was just skipping You can see the author just wanted to get to thet point fast and he didn’t care about how it got there. The first two time skips were mean less and that’s 5 years. Even if he wanted to be low-key since the whole city know he could talk and walk and train when he was 1 year old it was useless. His father already know he was special since birth but didn’t do anything. And that’s just the tip of the  iceberg. And that’s just the story development. Mind the shallow mc ,the useless guards and the sloppy power system in the world. Everything about it was just really sloppy and disappointing

Grammar 2/5Surprise surprise, another novel with a good idea only to be a weapon of grammar destruction.Your sentences don't make sense and you don't know how to interconnect conversations. You think that only with "bla bla" the people will understand who the **** is talking. But no, it doesn't help. Not even one bit.Not even that, you don't put descriptions on the dialogues, so most of the time I imagine 2 persons speaking like robots.ALSO!!! Can you PLEASE stop using Chinese additives to names? Nobody understands them and nobody likes them. Updates 4/5A lot of small chapters to build numbers, not something surprising. But a thing most authors do to gather people.Story 3/5Cliche after cliche. The school beauty falls in love with him the first time they meet because of a drawing he drew because he liked her smile. ok...wtf dude.Mother/Father believes his son no matter what. And they suddenly gained powers, What effects would make in their life? In their daily lives? In their work? Interaction with friends? No mention of them at all.Best friend and him always talk with the sentence "Bro

First of all, this made me laugh. It was a fun read and I really liked it. There wasn't much development in the first chapter: it was mostly worldbuilding. I tend to prefer 'escape from reality novels a lot and this is in my ball park. Keep up the good work.

"Yow! Sorry, traffic again." That's like, the lamest excuse...