Writing skill is good to the point I'm envious of it.Update stability?? who knows!~Story development?? because I'm reader who always imagine myself as protagonist so I'm a bit biased!! so my opinion its trash because my brain pressured non-stop since I'm binge reading this novel 2-3 day!~Character design?? no matter how good it is, its useless since the author will screw him over and over to the point I'm tired of it!~World background?? its quite good?? meh its still ruined by non-stop torture of fate!~my previous review is too much when I see your efforts writing this so I'm increasing it but after hard time to think, this is all I can give you!!~at least your skill in writing is good, so be proud of that!!~though that non-stop screwing your own MC seem too much for me but maybe its your fetish?? meh whatever!!~
nice story .... with amaaazing content 😏- good english ✅- hot and protective ML 😍✅- till now no boring b*tches who scheme against the FL ✅😊 - no genius FL ✅ (I hate the too overpowerd FLs 😂) - very funny (system comments) ✅—> All in all, just great ☺️
Another boring cliche novel which makes one doubt if all the future novels in webnovel will be just like this.Honestly the novel isn't special, and doesn't stand out in any aspect, every part of it from the plot, to character designs, and story development, everything reminds us of parts of other novels we've read. So take my word for it, this novel isn't worth reading, even if you are bored out of your mind and have no more novels to read
It reminds me of the Legendary Mechanic, but with its own twist. The MC is funny and sarcastic. A must read, I recommend reading up to 10 chapters. Refreshing to say the least with plenty of plot twists to keep you laughing.
At the beginning of the story, I was really skeptical I'm to going to lie. There were grammar mistakes, the characters seemed underdeveloped and I barely understood anything that happened due to the lack of deeper expansion of the world setting. But after spending some time working with Ultra to fix the mistakes, the plot started to make a lot more sense to me and although it may not have shone in the text yet, Jack started to undergo character changes that made him a much more understandable character. Overall, the story has a slow start. The beginning doesn't have the same hook as other stories may give but after a few chapters, you start to get more into the story and the characters that annoyed you at the beginning start to grow on you, It's a great read really, just don't give up at the beginning because you're going to regret it later
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