Apocalypse Ender

I have read chapter 179 of the novel and in process. The story is really good and keeps you hooked up and makes you interested. Also I know this is completely fictional, but still. .. . the author should have brought little bit of reality as well. the whole book is missing law and order. But it's a great book.

I really want to like the novel, but story has one huge problem. Arman. I have read till c100 and after they leave the first island, story slowly starts to convert into Arman's story, especially after they leave for human lands.After they arrive to the city mc basically becomes nothing more than side character, we follow Arman's stupid and annoying shenanigans, Arman is one doing the talking, Arman is one starting the fights.Mc's role on other hand is pretty much to stay in background, pay, guard and be an nanny for Armand. Mc really only gets some time on the story when there are enough problems and he much come in to clean the mess. Idk, I just expected story to be about mc, not Arman. Besides, Arman is constructed like stereotypical "comedy" side kick, comedy meaning he's just super annoying.

I liked this one. It is a work that successfully blended fantasy and drama. Poor Inut, he deserves more than this in my opinion but it is the author's choice, respect :)

I'll only sat this once but on the same day he wakes up not even 10 minets into it and he already starts raping his sister.And dident even care if he will die again.And coplains that he dosent want to go to that coprete orking hell he'll.But decided not to think rationally and to calm himself but to **** it and rape his suposed sister.He dident even think this is a new chance at life and I'll make the bomb shell of a sister mine but I need  to know what's going on. Theres no of that. Only **** first think later.

To the original author and the new author, I'd like to give my sincerest thanks for writing such a good novel. I'm thoroughly entertained.Normally I'm not a fan of aloof and robot-like MCs, since they often come off as boring and usually kill whatever story development or character growth there could have been. But this MC has, beneath that cold exterior, a warm and beating heart and a well-explained past for trying to kill off his own emotions. The humour ain't nothing to sneeze at either and the supporting characters have depth and aren't just passersby to fill the gap. Much appreciated.

I like the plot of the story. So far, the grammar is pretty good.So don't drop this story...............................................................

"Delias pretty unreliable............as for what I am and who I am? I know neither but thats none of your business" I reply while giving a potion to the geodude so it isnt too weak to defend itself when it wakes up

Amirah nods gravely.