i love this novel. the background of this novel is very good, story development is also nice, i also found some spelling mistakebut i will still give 5 stars, charector desing is also superb. inshort i love it
I've read up to Ch 27, so I'm basing my review on what I've read so far.Firstly, I want to say that I really enjoy this novel, it's so rare to read a sign-in novel with a female MC, so I was so happy to find this one! The setting is interesting and diverse, and the characters are good and have great dynamics.Now because I've read a lot of sign-in stories, there are some things I think this novel could do better. Sometimes I forget this is a sign-in novel at all, as the rewards aren't mentioned often and the system takes a backseat to the plot of the story. I consider this a problem, as no matter how good the story is I think the basis should be the system and how it impacts the story. I would love it if the rewards were mentioned more often. I know the author said they didn't want it to impact the plot and pacing too much, but I think the rewards of the system should have more impact on the plot. The system is supposed to be super intelligent, why doesn't it give her things she really needs (or might not know she needs) and then those rewards can play an integral part in the next little bit of the story? It doesn't matter how extravagant the rewards are as long as they're used properly by her and the plot.I also am surprised by her decision to start a charity right away rather than a big business that could increase her funds substantially and help fund her charity work.Otherwise, I really like the novel and I can't wait till the love interests are introduced!
New here and this is this is recommended by a friend. Currently sitting by the window in a rainy weather with a laptop and reading this while taking hot tea just makes my day refreshing. Thanks for the chapters and do not change development style suddenly
The queen was being assaulted by the man with a multitude of attack. She was not able to move now but was still keeping his focus on herself. She had been inflicted with cuts on her face and her hands were vibrating from this prolonged fighting. The assailant took the chance and stabbed his dagger in her shoulder.
"Bagaimanapun, kita dipanggil di sini dan itu adalah hak kita untuk menjelaskan semuanya kepada kita! Terutama jika kita hampir terbunuh karenanya!"Asuka berkata dengan nada tinggi, menyebabkan Iris tersentak mengingat Hermoine berteriak padanya untuk omong kosong konyol yang sering dia lakukan.
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