Antagonist Protection Service

"Are you really ok?"

Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?

Good writing style, and interesting story. But maybe you can more elaborate Carmila's revenge in prologue/chapter 1. In addition, don't forget a hook so the readers will be curious about the next chapter.

This is a type of story that i like the most. The MC is smart and the char development is good. This is similar of Classroom of Elite but this have another unique selling point. Nice Author!

Heya! GlaringError here! Thank you for giving this book a chance! :)So this is my second book on WN. Those who know me and read my first-ever book exceeding 100 plus chapters (TRA) know how I write stories. Even after writing so many chapters, I would say I am not yet as experienced as others on this platform who have been writing for years.Still, I will do my very best to write an amazing story that I would feel proud of sharing with you all! Hence my 2025 WSA entry with this book!I have learned a lot about writing and storytelling these past 7 months since TRA started, and I will say that all that I have learned I want to apply in this story! There were many mistakes that I made as an amateur writer which I want to improve on with this book. Basically, this book is a younger brother of my last work. Is it connected or not? No comments.I hope you enjoy it. :)About the story:It's a story in a very modern setting. It is about a VR game, but it's not played as a normal MMORPG. I have experimented with a lot of elements here... You will see if you read it. The idea was with me for a long time in my life, I hesitated before putting it into writing. I don't know... it just felt like it was too close to me, and no matter how I write it, I will not be able to do it justice.But I gotta try!It's a really big story—well, in my mind, it is. I will have to see how it goes before I build tons and tons of lore. :)Oh yeah! The MC has a genetic problem and can't speak. He uses sign language. This element is dedicated to one of my closest friends in school who also has the same condition. He was quite popular though, and he helped me, a poor introvert blob, quite a lot in surviving high school... We loved reading and finding interesting books together from the library. :)

Great novel. Please upload more chapters because the chapter ended on an exciting event. The story line is very gripping from the beginning. Have recommended it to friends!

The story so far is going WELL. My friends will LOVE this!Can't wait for more!