Author keeps giving the MC abilities that he clearly does not have, it's super stupid and annoying. MC is very stupid, and keeps making weird decisions. Plot is kinda forced, and MC is not allowed to change the timeline, or someone will smite him or something idiotic like that.It's very clear to see from here that the author actually has no understanding of Marvel, or Slime.
Author is racist, in the second and third chapter there were some thugs who 'happened' to all be black. When Ron (the MC) confronts them, he calls them "Slaves
IT BEEN FOREVER SENSE U PUT ANY CHAPTERS OUT!! R U GOING TO COME BACK OR NOT?? IF NOT CAN U JUST TAKE UR BOOK DONE PLEASE BECAUSE I REALLY DONT WANT MY HOPES TO BE SO HIGH ALL THE TIME WAITING FOR U!! I LOVE THIS BOOK AND WANT TO SEE IT CONTINUE BUT OBVIOUSLY SOMETHING IS GOING ON AND IF UR NOT GOING TO KEEP IT GOING THEN JUST GET RID OF IT PLEASE!! DONT MIND THE CAPS MY PHONE IS BROKE BUT I REALLY LOVE THIS BOOK AND WANT IT TO KEEP GOING!!!
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