Only those who played "Harvestmoon: Friends of Mineral Town" can relate to this novel.. first game i played in gameboy advance.. but it is improved now.
I am not sure I can say much good about this book. Writing English novels is not a good plan for you. The characters are bland and generic. It is not interesting.
I will giving this novel 5 stars as I enjoyed the first few chapters. I can't read the whole novel as I don't have enough time currently. Maybe I will read it next week but it is a really good novel with humour and good characters.You can also read my novel 'Ancient Age Online' and 'Entertainment king: The king of showbiz'. I hope the author won't mind me promoting my novel here.
It is currently the tenth chapter. The story has been good so far, but the start was a little confusing, atleast for me. I think that this will turn out to be a good novel in this genre. The fact that this is in my opinion a promising novel is simply because of the family dynamic, most novels don't have this kind of family thing going on for them, at most the mc will be dating someone and that is in my opinion really boring.in short: A really promising novel, that has a great family dynamic.And author pls update the novel!!!!!
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So far, an interesting novel with nice lessons from the father character, as well as an interesting storyline. However, in the first chapter, there are too many commas in each sentence and many run-on sentences. It gets better after that chapter, but there are still many wrong tenses used, the characters don't really speak their age, and there's incorrect character quotation punctuations and capitalizations (ex- "back then, these were the days!." should become "Back then, those were the days!" To the author, I suggest researching a bit more on quotations by reading physical books in the english language).But these are all pretty small things if you ignore them and just read the story. Pretty good overall, I would definitely keep reading if the author releases more chapters. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens next!
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