Whenever mc goes on his adventures, someone always watch his back/monitor him, and then he goes like 'I have bad premonition' but then he still act like idiot and then run for his life🥴
This is a must read. This is the best to come from trial read in a while. There have been too many simulators, farms, pets, etc lately. This is a fun change of pace, not to be taken too seriously. Plenty of overanalyzing by third parties that come up with a conclusion on their own. This had me audibly laughing multiple times. The rate of progression is a bit fast, but the leveling system hasn’t been too prevalent yet. Give it a read!
This story was a big disappointment. In the first projection he faces against its stated that when he kicked the thigh of the projection it was in extreme pain but it didnt affect its mobility, then it says the projection was limping??? And then it says that the projection doesnt feel pain. this plothole literally made me drop this story so fast. the sentences were at a max of 6 sentences apart so i dont know how the author managed to contradict themself like that.
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