ALTERITY: A Divergent Soul

The translator seems approachable, at least with the end notes for each chapter. The novel itself is machine translated, but the edits aren't too bad. It's legible, with only the occasional mistake in switched genders or strange terms. The storyline itself is interesting, and I look forward to how the MC develops. My only gripe is that the MC is very passive. Even when opportunity presents itself, he only takes action if it immediately impacts him.

This is legendary please continue writingIt .

needs more detail in his inventions he makes. you keep doing he Or she it's confusing. your charging coins for small chapters 😤

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This novel had a lot of potential when it started out. Unfortunately the author seems to have gotten bored early in and do the concept fell into random chapters of disconnected story arcs for no apparent reason. Left one with a feeling of the whole thing being extremely forced. Lacks proper planning and development needed to hold an audience.

1 chaptwrs in and it’s already bad enough for me to feel the urge to write a review for future readers of this novel lol anyways author can you hire an editor

I loved this,, only thing is, what was in that CD ..... Thank you for this Author-san.