a VERY intriguing plot... the synopsis does its job of attracting the readers and the very first chapter makes you know the characters which to me is very interesting. Looking forward to completing the read.
Writing is smooth with little to no grammer mistakes that caught my attention.Characters are nice but i feel like they crush on him really easily probably there are other reasons for that will be revealed later but still there couldve been more interaction between them before at least they realize they are smitten by him.Other than that i feel like pace is good with captivating writing style keep up the good work.
Jenny awoke to the sun later the next morning. The trees were blowing in the slight wind and there was a thin layer of dew all over her and everything surrounding her. Her back hurt so bad, her spine sore from sitting up on the rough bark of the tree last night. Wrens backpack sat atop her lap, and she was belted to the tree, the knott tied extra tight.
The troll took two steps backwards, but Hanzo just get closer by facing the same number of steps forward, it went on and on until the troll find himself resting on a "wall".
But even if such was already the case, she could still feel that piercing gaze directed towards her and it was rather intimidating. Laurice gulped inconspicuously. She was not that immune and courageous after all, she reckoned.
The chief, Jones, is only stayed here for a year. In Waltz village, the chief seat is always passed down to the previous chief family, and Jones is suddenly replacing the previous chief. The previous chief told the villager that he will traveled to his homeland and Jones will replacing him for the chief position.
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