Beautifully written, the character growth is nice and subtle over the chapters. This is a slow burn, but it allows you to get to know and love the characters. The character designs are great! I wish this story updated more, and I can't wait for the future chapters. Definitely recommend.
so like me, you also write using the first pov narrative... but this style is only meant for story with a nuance of comedy or to be exact, the English words should be casual and entertaining because the one that is speaking is the characters, not the author. Too much description is also a no no to this style.. why? because if you tell a story yourself, you won't yap about everything you saw right? However the content is interesting,, keep it up!!
here is review: first I liked it, even tho it was like solo leveling I thought the following chapters will change or something but Arthur you copy it like even the task and the system thing I guess that's were it became boring to me well even though it's great for someone who don't know solo leveling recommended.
Sweeties! I am back. Happy New Year 2025. Leaving a review for myself and giving it 5 stars rating. I hope you have fun reading and enjoy each and every chapter as I pen down this great works. Cheers.
Storytelling is good not fastpaced everything is building well hope to see multiple female leads for audience sake of course over mc must have harem these is the one of the best indian novel so far with steady chapters
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