I don’t mind the muscle headed part as its rather refreshing. But the arrogant attitude and the constant chunni talk during the fight is incredibly repulsive. Could you not have made it so generic? Could you not have made his personality so bland? Could you have made him into an actual battle maniac that loves fighting and shows it? The constant trash talk and remarks are what killed your novel when you could’ve had so many more readers and not the brainless trash that rate your novel 5 stars whilst you probably deleting the reviews that give you low star rating.
A very interesting idea and a pretty solid story so far I personnaly like the slower developing story but some people do complain about it reguardless it is slower so keep that in mind before you pick it upThe parasites are interesting and i could really see them becoming a unique dynamic not only in the way they affect the mcs power but in how they interact together as symbiotic allies.Slower release rate and unstable releases is a bit sad mostly because the stories good and its a pain to keep dipping in and out of it randomly
Hey it nice to Hear from you again i was a Huge fan i was stun after i read your announcement in Wattpad but i kinda get you since my reason for staying there is because of your Work and the Fan fic i like i agree with you wattpad wasn't much fun now , I like web novel though i don't have enough funds to have reading frenzy but rest assured that every time i have Budget i'll top up so i could read your work i'm looking Forward for the completion of silver wing Academy Volume 4 hehe sincerely Your Certified Linel Fan
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