Aiza:

It's good but, I think they are both OP so fast in the story plot make different activities in their doing.                                          

Hello, struggling author Romeru here. First of all, thank you for checking out my novel, love you guys. This is my 3rd contracted novel here and hoping 3rd time is the charm T_T So please do try and read it if you have time.As tradition, here is what to expect when reading my novel,The Good:1. I will do my unyielding best to be an author deserving to be at the top, even though we are currently at the bottom.2. I am your friend.The Reality:1. My main character is flawed and imperfect. He may be an apex badass, but there are moments when he is proven wrong. So if you are expecting a perfect MC who seem to always make the best decisions, you might not like this.2. Grammar mistakes. I tend to mix up my gender pronouns since they don't exist in my native language T_T3. Pacing will shift from time to time. Mostly fast, but when it is slow, it is slow.4. I don't write with an ending, so I am as clueless to the story as you are, we are in this journey, literally together.5. Plot holes - If we fall in them, we fall together. Always together.6. Character driven – The story will develop in a way that advances the story of the characters, MC or not.6. Inconsistencies – I have a very short memory span, so please do point out if I mistake what hair color one of the characters has.Here's what to do before reading this book:1. Play some music.2. If you are on the toilet, please wash your butt first.3. Shut your mind from from the notion of realism. I will try my best to be as realistic as possible, but there's only so much I could do when people could fly using magic swords.4. Please avoid comparing it from other novels, you might end up not enjoying the book.Other than that, I hope you enjoy reading :)

A part of me wonders if this is a part of a conspiracy by scientists to test the limits of what Webnovel readers can read. If you're looking to be mildly entertained then I'm afraid this novel isn't for you since this isn't even capable of that, this novels greatest moments are lukewarm at best.There's not even a shred of originality to be found here, all we've got really is just a tepid rehash of the other 5 million "Critical Chance Multiplication" novels out there. It's hard to criticise the story or any other element of this novel really because they all feel non existent or blank, it isn't easy to dissect the novel equivalent to a sheet of white paper with some squiggly lines on it but I'ma try anyways.There is literally NO story. There is no world building (it's literally the same generic world you see in every other cultivation novel). There are no characters that aren't copypasted. This feels like reading a whole lot of nothing. If this novel was a spice, it'd be flour.I'd bet good money on me forgetting quite literally everything about this novel after I wake up tomorrow, this novel has been a mind numbingly forgettable experience. 0.5/5

Goddamnit, I only read the first 3 or 4 chapters and this **** is absolute Shit! I'm not interested in reading PUBG! This is disgusting.Dndjsksndkdnajdbsidbwkcndiahtheurbwocnaoviebguabvosbcjsjdc

The prologue of this immediately sucks one in into mystery, and hopefully, as the chapter count expands, that mystery is fulfilled.The author exhibits clear control of the English language, making for a smooth reading experience, though slightly brought down by the occasional wall of text.As for the story and worldbuilding, I'd say that people who like superpower settings will appreciate this work, as it fits well into the quality expectations of the genre.Character design remains rather enigmatic, but some implicit signs of depth show potential for growth and fleshing out.Good job, author!

There was a book like this.But the mc was a slave from the begining.If this one have his own smithy and do what he wants i read it.If not forget it.

Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

Overall this is a great story! I enjoy the many different characters and the world building that goes on in this novel. My favorite character is Cliff haha and I have really enjoyed his character progression throughout the story and am always excited whenever he has some screentime (please have more chapters for Cliff to satisfy my craving lol) This was the first story that i have been invested in on this platform and will continue to support the journey!