Agneya - The Unknown King

I really love this story.... but truthfully, the sprinkle romance as you said it, is killing the story. I think her character is annoying and pushy. That why I gave character designs only 4. I actually ant to give only 3 but never mind. The stability of update is given only 4 becoz I want you to update more, haha. Overall it a good story and I like it very much. Thanks for your hard work author and keep up. I will be waiting for more update. Lol

I've read the author other fanfic "Reincarnated in my own Douluo Dalu Fanfiction?!" and I loved it very much. So obviously I believe this one will be just as good so I will give it a five star review to start its career hehe.Good luck author!

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This story is relatively fast paced which a lot of people including myself like a lot. However, the lack of world building really gets to me. In any cultivation novel, or any novel with supernatural powers, there is a power system with somewhat clear rankings. For this novel though it seems the author comes up with new realms as they’re writing. The MC’s character is fine. Basically any generic Chinese cultivation novel mc who is ruthless and kills decisively. The biggest flaw, for me though is the horrendous world building and lack of clear cultivation ranks. I only read up to chapter 70 so maybe in the future chapters it got better, but that was my limit. The introduction of realms, without knowing how far it was from the MC’s current realm, was frustrating. If you like fast paced, fast food novels with a bunch of idiotic background characters, then this is for you. I would have actually enjoyed this novel if there was proper world building. Some times you just want to turn off your brain and read fast food novels.

While the story is held back by strange word choice, minor plot holes, clunky dialogue and foreshadowing that makes no sense until the pay off, The grammar is good for the most part, the characters are unique and the general premise of the story is good. One of the better web stories I've read in a while.

I enjoyed reading this so far. The character design is nice and different, I haven't seen something to the main character in a while. Keep on going!

Story plot is good Not rush Op mc With its struggles Good suddle comedy 🎭 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲

Good job author. This is a very good cultivation novel which does not follow the normal repetitive cliches that plague chinese novels. So far I like everything about this novel and I hope it continues to impress