After Transmigrating to the 1980s as a Substitute Bride I Became the Officer's Beloved Wife

this isn't a deep story. this isn't even really a massive super hit. but. it has a charm. the characters are fun. the scenes are fun. the system is fun. and isn't that all we really ask for in a story? something that is just fun?

Don't read this novel, let alone read the unlocked chapters..Because you will definitely regret it, because MC is 1000% slave of the system. Your brain will be damaged reading this 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😁

Very good so far. i like how the mc is thinking things through and isnt doing things without thinking about the consequences. :) keep up the great work.👍👍👍😀

i have read about 70 chapters and this is my review, there a while lot more downsides to the story than upsides.The novel has a good story and  a decent MC with decent word building but that's about it. I sincerely hope that this book is a translation because other than that I can't find another good reason for how bad the writing is. From purely a grammatical standpoint this novel feels like it's written by a 4th to 6th grader; words that don't even make sense are used in sentences, phrases that don't go along with the story, and the writing only gets worse as the story progresses. And the story development isn't a whole lot better, characters show little to no improvement over entire lengths of the novel, the author is constantly switching up the classifications of power systems(never explains it either), and for some reason the language of the novel completely changes after chp 73 like there's a while new author writing the story.

General Dwight announced, "I found some talent today at the shopping center back at the city. Sign this kid up for regiment 37."

She knew that Luna's courtyard was old and worn down but because she had left for a month it had become even worse.

Place, Soul Station - Time, XII : XXIII - Year, 1%!9683!$*73*!&^!03RR0R-

Good day to you all! I like the story so far. Keep it up you will get better at time gose on. Don't give up on trying we all have to start somewhere.