I love cliffhangers and thrills but from all the cliffhangers here, this one is the one I am most disappointed with. So disappointed. Very disappointed. If I could write the word DISAPPOINTED a thousand times then I would but that's pointless. 😡There's no question with regards to their mission but hanging the storyline there...huh
the story is good from the start and the Mc is to OP not until on chapter 30+ and when Fubuki is from another world too and he know all the plot and the you know is not what you think she's annoying keep asking the mc about his past and power and the suddenly become a simp and dumb he tell all his power to Fubuki and all he's secret as well....I just waste my time reading this!!!!
It's a mess. It's a hodgepodge of ideas from different stories connected through the idea of a house mutating. Or a system connected to a house. By chapter 20 something, it's a system with personality novel and the house is sidelined as a resource. This story doesn't know what it wants to be.At least the basic writing is decent - no bad grammar, half-finished sentences or vocabulary used oddly.It could have been a good story even with the elements from different novels (shadow hack, fishing the myriad heavens, my backyard is a dump..) if the unique aspect, the house, was developed properly. And by that I mean in a consistent way, with house as the focus, and using elements from those stories that fit with the golden finger, that is, the house. But alas, earwax, ahem, no, I mean it's not to be.
the pacing is kinda bad like i took 5to10chapters for like a week normally that's okay but the story felt supppeeeerrr slow like i felt i wasn't reading a novel but a 3hour guide to something but it only took like 5mins kinda got bored 😴😴😴 but is a good story nonetheless
Also here because of the old version and I really hope that it works out this time.Also I must praise Author Truedawn for the amazing picture of the Novel.
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