“After Marriage, the Young Master Domineeringly Pampers and Forcefully Loves Her!”

We thought that the girl is kidnapped but she already enter her house. I knocked her house and asked what the van driver asked. She said that they ask route for hospital then she asked who are you. I explain that I'm the who give a talk for their class. Her explanation surprised us, she is twin sister of the victim and she said that her twin should be on the way from school to home.

Two: I am the younger twin brother of sasuke Uchiha don't think I remember who he is though

<p>"haha..haha…. you're right boss. What's the use of bringing this weakling here"</p>

'Huh, I'm running out of oxygen again.'

Well to  put it simple it's very bad. Of course you might like it, but that doesn't change the fact that the story feels rushed, several technologies are skipped with gaps that don't make sense, the wars are in a new level of incompetent writing and are nonsensical, the MC is and idiot who is supposed to be a super genius and still makes the worst decision most of the time, the society and the relations are anything but good and organic, there's a lot of errors and plot holes, the MC doesn't follow the rules already established, the moral of some "Good" actions of the MC are questionable at best, everything happens much faster then it should and many more problems. I don't recommend, but if you want to read, go ahead.

nice read...keep up the good work AUTHOR & and all my power stones are yours to take...

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W man. i like zero's personally he'll solo most of scd in fast+big pic thiking on normal n narrative scaling with that fact

The story is nice but it needs improvement in part of the explanation.Also Make bed scenes little more explainable

An advice...work better on your book synopsis. Just saying, this is the journey of this person and this person does not do enough justice to the book's quality content. A little more details might help to get potential readers attention.Nice work though. continue.