After I Made My Gyaru Debut, I Was Caught Staring At The Plain Girl Who Was My Type And Was Interrogated By Her

I feel like this story was doing really well then in 3 chapters went from the character actually developing in a good direction to him being yeeted back in to being a puss boy. Don’t really know how to feel about that

What a shame...... clearly it's a sketch of the novel profane prince of domination, however it's a little worse, mc poorly done, and the way you try to fragment the scenes is bad, after all it's not an anime, it doesn't flow  .

writing quality:4. not many problems and it is legible. Some editing would really help.stability of updates:5. very frequent. not much else to say here.story development:5. story is developing. fast. very fast. mainly due to the insane leveling speed of the main character that there needs to be a fast plot development.character design:2. main character is bland. side characters are bland. every person seems bland. All that is known is a not very ugly guy grinding in insanely fast speed because he knows things due to reincarnation and that he isolates himself.world background:2. not enough details that would explain the world. It is one thing to neglect the real world as the main focus is the game but to neglect the world building in the game as well? that's a big mistake. in the beginning village it can be excused because MC really just skipped past it and just grinded until he could enter the city. But even after he enters the city there are still no details. MC just goes somewhere and he is there. where is the direction? what does the place look like? what are the landmarks? MC is just grind grind grinding that the world building is severely lacking.THE BIGGEST FLAW OF THIS BOOK: EXP GAINBefore level 10, the exp for a level up seems to be in the hundreds. between 10-20 the exp seems to be in the hundred thousands seeing the levels he gained from killing first boss class monster. okay. explainable as he has 300% exp gain from his title. good explanation right? no. MC is a VERSATILE class, which author stated IS INSANELY HARD TO LEVEL UP.  Following that reasoning, MC should at best be slightly ahead of the other players, given his knowledge from reincarnation that gives him an edge over others. However, by chapter 34 every other player is still below level 20. guess where our MC is at? OVER 50. Author also stated in the beginning that it took him about 25 years to reach level 500 so here I thought it would take awhile but our MC gets to level 50 is like less than a week (or is it a month?). In any case. at that pace, MC will probably get to level 500 in probably a year.Don't expect too much. It's not the worst, but neither is it the best. If you can ignore the exp problem, this is great for reading if you got nothing else and are waiting for other novels to update.

This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

Absolute trash.Waste of time.Why do people create this type of novel, when they know they were getting nowhere with this.First 15 chapters are way too cringe.

Please update update update good book i like read 👍👍..

Captivating plot, rich characters, and beautiful prose. A must-read

"It's not like that! I mean, I'm dating you. I would never cheat on you. Actions speak larger than words, right? How about we visit the park tomorrow after school together?" I said frantically to prevent Uki-chan from getting any suspicions.