Please try and pay attention to the tense of the words you use, some of your sentences are incomplete or too short. As well as some words are misspelled, but overall still understandable and thankfully your pronouns are good.When did and why does Shiyuki have a crystal heart? I thought Shiroe was the only one to have one, because it was an experiment from that 'woman' that their grandmother gave permission for her to experiment with Shido?Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one!!!View More
The synopsis attracted me and the story itself made me stay. I really love this novel and the chapter release rate of the author is also so fast. Please don't exhaust yourself Mr. author and I really hope the novel keeps going. I will not talk about the story as its just better to go and read it instead. I'll be just spoiling the good fun.Keep up the good work!
Very good hostoriabme love the development that is having and more than anything I hope that it is not abandoned I see how incredible the story will be if it is not left abandoned for me is very well raised, I want the development until it stayed
Oh, your second book, Senpai? The title is really eye-catching and the first few chapters had a nice balance of comedy and zombie apocalypse going on. This is going to be a good novel!Keep up the good work author!
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