Aetheron

Honestly it suck, I've read 60ish raw chapter and can just say that author/MC is forcing too much on losing money that it downgrade all the good quality of it's story. I'm not against MC fully using it's system but I think the fact that he needs to "lose" money on his gf so that he can get x100 back is annoying. He doesn't seems to care much about her tbh, he "use" her as cash cow and she fell in love with his "kindness" as for him it's a pretty good deal 'cause she's beautiful, skillful, obedient and many more, anyway I don't rly feel any love from MC or it's not very well pronounced. Later he's just trying to make money (losing) and for that he needs to invest on his GF but her GF is so kind that she try to minimize the lose but he still try even though he gain money by doing business by investing on her. I'm honestly fed up by his greed or what's over. In the end it's a game of who can lose or minimize (and have profit) money. Anyway idea's all right, not very original but still could have been interesting but ended up bad with it's setting like it's system rebate or MC personality.

Very solid novel with good plot and characters, decent grammar, good pace n stable updates.I would 100% recommend it to anyone, you are not going to regret reading this one, its one of the best novels on this platform n deserve wayyyyy more recognition.

i like it.....................yes that's it also he Fights Slimes with his Sclong Have a SPECIAL MOVE LITERALLY CALLED C##K SLAM Never Laughed this hard.

Excellent story so far. I love the inclusion of polygamy into the story as I am so tired of seeing a harem where the MC doesn’t actually marry any of the women. So thank you so much for including actual wives for the MC in your story. Keep up the great work. Can’t wait to read more.

I've just read a few chapters and I already love it! It's genuinely interesting and making me want to read more.Every chapter of this book is enchanting to me in their own way. Good job author!

This is about 2 brothers exploring a VRMMORPG game and its mysteries, when they do discover what this game it about.... honestly can't continue without spoiling the ending a bit, so..... enjoy?

Hello there, it is me, the author!I'll be reviewing my novel even though it's quite late already.First, what I want to say is that, the quality of the works I can't guarantee, maybe it's cause I'm new, I'm hesitant about a few things and can't fully express what i wanted to portray in the story.For updating stability.... uhm.. hehe, I'm not sure about that one as well.But anyways, after all my flaws is resolve, I will for sure try to improve this work with a few edits.So, finally, please do support my novel even if it's lacking quite a lot in some aspect. Thank you!

Upgration selfdestroction evasion!!