>> Read this till 280 chapter. I was really looking forward to this novel. The idea of MC being famous coz of Alchemist profession was great but till Chapter 280 there is not an ounce of alchemy involved (it might be there in later chapters but it would have been better if MC mentioned it in earlier chapters on his plans and all)World building is nice. >> Character development is okay.>> Character growth and connections with others is kinda lame. >> Starting was good and I was really looking forward to it. Later, the story keeps me thinking as if written by some 16 yr old kid.>> @Author Don't get me wrong. I've nothing against you and I would love to see this novel grow more beautifully.I would love to help if you are looking for somebody to proofread.>> I would really like it if we could connect (to bounce some ideas) Pls reply back if u r okay with it and I will send my email.
reincarnated into his young self: checkwas super cultivator in past life: checkhas super cultivation technique that his past self didnt practice: checkis poor: checkhas grievances in past life: checkhas saved super rich grampa/girl/kid with his awesome medical skills: checkhas saved kidnapped girl: checkracism/nationalism: checkstopped reading: checkoverall so full of cliches that i was going to give it 2. until they started with korean character that goes like: taekwando best, china martial arts crap. if there is something i detest more than lazy cliche writing, it is racism/nationalism inside chinese novels. it is done so badly and one dimensionally that it just portrays authors indoctrinated hatred towards certain nationalities without any validity.
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Wonderful writing. Very well put together. I love the characters and how the story builds around them. I can tell you put some good thought into your writing.. Well done my friend.
The weapons shoot out from the ripples and pierce through the scale of the dragon. With each weapon that pierced, the dragon will let out a cry as its body becomes like a pin cushion. The divine dragon bleed out like a fountain, its golden blood was raining towards the whole capital.
"Diana don't at-" his warning too late as Diana launched herself at the god with the intent to kill. She tackled him out the room and bruce cursed his luck when the jet arrived. He pulled Flash to the exit and to the cockpit. He threw flash inside and started gaining altitude. He looked out the window as he saw the smoke from the clash and saw a bruised Wonderwoman fly out of the building. He wasted no time contacting her.
Frederick felt that it was not a rollercoaster he had been placed onto, it was in fact, a rocket. Shot off, into God knows what direction, Frederick felt he had lost all his abilities to compute the situation.
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