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He replied ''Date''. But she didnot know him how could she go to date with a stranger. Whatever it was her fault that his clothes were damaged so must accept his proposal . As if he had guessed her mind, he introduced himself ''Liu Jianguo''. He took out her phone from her clothes and saved his number. Xiu Ying regained herself.When she was to exit the car,he pulled her and kissed on her forehead.At that time, a warmth feeling flow in her heart which she never felt after losing her brother and parents.She looked at him and smiled.Then she went out of  car and returned back to the cafe without looking back.He looked at her back until her appearance disappeared.He slapped on his head,why couldn't he control his feelings when it came to her?She might had been scared and rejected him.However,he was so happy to see and hold her in his arms.He could still feel her warm and scent in his arms. After some time, he left.

Rachel ran over to the elder. Her eyes widened.

The storylines are good!! I find the story entertaining to me. But, I do saw a few sentences and lines that can be fixed. I will talk about the summary first. You can use your own idea if you want. I only give you a suggestion. (I'm not that pro myself)" On the day of her Coronation, rebels from the enemies sect appeared. Of course, as a skilled Dragon warrior, she had nothing to worry about.That was it until she realized the bitter truth. She was poisoned!!!"Damn.. I don't even know what I did is right or not..😂😂I don't see any mistake anywhere aside from you need to search for more suitable synonym for some words in your novel. That's all!!ᕙ(＠°▽°＠)ᕗ Work hard and don't give up!!

A truly fantastic novel, with highly detailed and well-executed descriptions. The dialogues are also strong. However, some chapters feel a bit lengthy, and certain details could be condensed. Overall, it’s a great read!

Louis is totally blessed in the story. Having Jesus as your best buddy is no joke.I like his nickname more, J. C.Anyway, the story is very interesting and catchy. I like the humour and the twists, plus how the characters make appearances.

I really love this novel I can't more chapters update and I can't wait to see the mc became stronger and I also like the mc and the system arguing