Adam the God-Father of Humanity

I really liked this novel. It had a great idea and nice plot. But sadly the story was suddenly finished after chapter 224. It's really like the author thought bam I don't wanna write this anymore how can I finish this in one chapter. The plot doesn't leave an open end as some other authors do when they just drop their story but still I am a bit disappointed. (That's why I gave it only one star for story development.) The system is about acting. (system, plays in reality, fighting and action with the police)

The story is nothing new but interesting enough to give it a read. The main problem is the translation quality, with it getting worse as the book progresses. It would be great if the story received some editing.

All i can say is that this novel isn't getting the love it deserves from QI. Instead of promoting generic stories that revamp the same arc with different characters for 2000 chapters this should be brought front and center as a quality novel and translation. The best novel on this site(imho).

Real Score: 2/5 (Fix your scoring Webnovel)"I think I would prefer actual oblivion to this afterlife.)First I'd like to say that this story does seem to have some cool concepts. Setting the story in the actual afterlife is probably the most unique concept for a Isekai story that seem so obvious in retrospect. Like how have we not done this sooner. Anyway, they also flip the OP Power/Gift on its head but having the MC sell it for cash "Because it can't be too hard to level up right?" Not realizing that most people can't get past level 10 or 15. And the gift would have put him around level 30. That was actually funny, and a good way to have your cake and eat it too. And even if the afterlife shtick is only aesthetic it's cool to see. And its character driven, so points there.But that's about it. Now for negativity.Honestly, this is just Another, "get stronger to happy ending cultivation story." Just with an RPG level system, (which is overplayed by this point) and a Spooooky esthetic. The MC doesn't even meet historical figures, or dead friends and family. COME ON! It was right there. It's just so hard to love something when it trades everything that could be considered unique or interesting for generic fluff. It's hard to stay invested. And Yes I'm told that it "Gets Good" because all cultivation story's "Get Good." But you people know that that isn't a point in its favor, Right? Stick your leg in some acid and after a couple hours, yes you won't be in pain, yes. But taking the next step in your personal journey will be a bit difficult, won't it?!How about we try this!Why don't we write stories that are good all the way through rather than only 1% well written while swimming in a sea of 99% blandness.

The characters are abit...meh could use some more depth. The author English skills could difinitley use some help.The story development is a bit weird,it feels as if the step is jumping from one place to another and i cant catch up with that.The author should have emphasised on the trauma of killing a living being. 15 years old kids aren't professionally hit men. How the gurl acrually planned on killing him was out of this world's logic,but I will attribute to her being attribute sycopath with her friend.Over all attribute an immature story written but a high beginner or lower mid tier author. But it has potential to grow into somehing great so I will follow it for now

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I've read the author's plan (yes, he actually prepared one for this novel), and he has a fun world planned with lots of exciting twists.Give this young weeb a chance. 🙏

The idea was good enough but execution not so muchThings just happen without reason at all and come out of nowhere too many skips between storylines it feels like "We are doing this now, oops that's a lie, now we are doing that" it feels really weird to read, a lot of unfinished business.The grammar also doesn't help at allThe character interactions are weirdOverall it feels that things keep changing on a whim rather than planned