Can't say I'm impressed with the character given other abilities if already godlike. The power of Flight I'm rather content with, but the other powers were unnecessary...
Cant say Im surprised, considering that just about any 18+ harem novel gets astonishingly high readers, it was about time that we would see Webnovel lower themselves for more cash. Havent read this, wont read this, and it aint for me but whatever I guess Ill give this a 3
Its a pretty average story loaded with tons of references to other authors work. The author does say this him/her self in the comments of nearly each chapter. Which I can only give him/her Big praise for. The biggest Problem i have with it is that these tropes and refernces are just stacked behind each other without much strings between. It read like Multiple storys after each other without fleshing out of any Charakter. Maybe sometime I'll force my self to understand the plot but as of now I am dropping the story At the 30iest chapter Mark.Yours sincrrely,
Writing quality is decent and the author does a good job on updating it. The story development runs into coincidences that make it hard to believe becaus it’s so crazy comepared to the rest of the story. Characters develope fairly well and it needs more background to the surrounding world and what the culture is.
"I never needed one! I've managed to keep myself out of any serious trouble, I just thought that..."Aaron trailed off from his explanation, watching as Jackson rubbed his forehead in frustration. After a beat of silence Jackson motioned him to come closer, not even opening his eyes to face him. Aaron obliged, closing the gap between them when Jackson's hand rested on the top of his head. Aaron almost reeled back on reflex, but the muscles on Jackson's arms held firm and kept him in place.Aaron glanced at the man warily, not taking the invasion of his privacy lightly, but Jackson grumbled with enough intensity to keep him quiet. The two of them stood there for what felt like an eternity, until something bizarre happened.
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