Abyss of Secrets

This is the first WN I’ve read on this app and I’ve read around 50 other WN’s inbetween this WN and the review (I used other sites to read WN’s until I actually made an account), so my memory might be a bit hazy in terms of story development and world background.Writing Quality: 3.7/5 If I was the author I’d use a broader range of vocabulary, be more descriptive (quantity), and just have a detailed description (quality) if things like the surroundings, fights, etc.Writing Stability: 5/5 Not much to say here, 7-8 chapters a week consistently which is very good imo.Story Development: 3.2/5Some plot holes here and there but nothing too major to the point where it’s detrimental to the story. It’s still too early to comment on this since this WN feels like it’ll easily be over 1000 chapters. I just hope the pace doesnt skyrocket out of nowhere and just becomes like your average cultivation novel right before the typical “holy continent” arc.Character Design: 3.5/5It’s an odd mix of some characters are bland, some have an alright design, and some feel like actual humans. The MC has some dumb things about his personality like being overly paranoid of the system and his sponser. This category was originally going to be a 2.5/5, but after reading the recent chapters it looks like the huge main female cast might finally be getting some character development, so I decided to bump it to a 3.5/5. World Background: 3/5From what I’ve read so far this has the potential to be a 5/5 if the author plans ahead carefully and doesn’t rush the rest of the story. In general, we haven’t been told that much about the world and beyond it, but it’s clear that the author has plans to talk about everything more in depth later on in the story.This is my completely objective review so even though i gave it an overall rating of 3.6/5 that doesn’t mean that it wasn’t entertaining or that i didn’t enjoy it.When VC reaches the 550 chapter mark I’ll update this review and make it way more detailed and in-depth, but until then the review stays as is. I hope everyone that reads this has a good day, cya💯

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(Slightly spoilery review, but not really a spoiler)Good novel very enjoyable. The Mc is a transmigrator and more or less the typical cautious cowardly protagonist, but in my opinion its done in such a way where its not overly irritating and fits the novel. After all he is a background character so it makes sense and meshes well with his system's abilities.Besides the Mc the other characters have been given enough time to grow to a point where I at least have an inkling of each of them, although it would probably take a number of more chapters to make each of them more distinct. (talking about the side characters here) The development of the story can be considered slow, but I find it to be a good pace for a background character, naturally for protagonist speeds it does feel lacking but in the context of the novel its well paced.World Background is quite good so far, obviously its not all that fleshed out since the protagonist has stayed in the Sect for the entirety of the novel up to this point, but the Sect feels real at least which is more than I can say for most Xianxia. (although it still has a lot of the blatant Xianxia Sect stereotypes but rather than a flaw I'd say that's more played as a comedic aspect/the world purposefully being like a Xianxia novel.)To conclude this novel is a solid 4-5 stars, the only reason the score is as low as it is, is because of how infrequently its updated.I do recommend reading it though if you'd like a change from a traditional Xianxia, and are all right with the fact that the novel rarely update.

I do not seek to offend or insult anyone, it is my point of view.The novel has an interesting concept and premise.As for the rest:The mc feels stupid and meaningless, he trusts and falls in love EXTREMELY fast (in a matter of 1 paragraph or 1 chapter- I meet) just like the MC's girls, the romance is close to 0.There is no clear world development.The power system is totally unbalanced and with many inconsistencies and no senses.The mc's plot armor is at unnatural levels, equaling or even surpassing goku from DBZ or issei from DxD.In summary:A novel that could have had great potential, wasted by a lousy development.

Writing the review for support. The story needs some work but it has some promise, looking forward to future developments, author!  .......

This is no doubt a great series possibly one of the best on the website the only downside is the updates they are kind of inconsistent. 5/5 for everything other then the updates 3/5 for that

I like the novel stories.. And have read many of them.. But this is my first review... The story and plots are quiet gooo. Needed to work on proper words and story arc... Keep up the good work.. I like thestory

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