A technomancer’s journey in an apocalyptic world

Great idea, but bad writing quality in the early chapters. Also the events are not that clear...............................................

Unreadable. I really hope this novel is just an unfortunate google translate experiment. But deep in my soul I know that the author wrote all those terrible english sentences all on his own. Atrociously bad grammar and sentences structure.

i see wall of text, hard to read, hard to visualize, hard to imagine, hurts my eyes and imagination, I don't know why people recommend this.

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The grammar is bad, really bad, one of the worst ive seen on here. Not to mention theres no real flow to this “novel” and its all over the place.

The story is good but the author writes very slowly.  It should not be that difficult to write the events that will happen.At least the connected chapter should release together.