Peak is back but one question if you were going to keep some names from the previous version then why didn’t you keep the name of the MC it Feels weird reading his name so at least keep the name of the FL also make the MC use some gauntlets
well I have written so many stories but your story is looking like a something new fresh fresh fruit because it is so nicely return that I am looking like it a fabulous work
HelloThe progression is good of this book.Keep at it. I guess you can develop his Gold finger as he develops his mana.Now I know we are not limited to only 1 beast to be tamed as the teacher had 2 so far.I'd like to know if the beast master himself has talents and how it is dependent on the beast too.For example, if the beast adept will the beast master be held for that? what if the beast master had a Mythic one, they'll develop to be Mythic? how does beast master's role play into this? I'd like more ideas of how the world is and more explanations of beasts and bonds and development.I know it's just 12 chaps now so I'm looking forward to how it develops and implements.Keep on going!!! Good Job!
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