A Silent Vow

some random villains keeps popping up everywhere . And every villain encounter Mc is always shock because they are strong and it gets annoying that makes me want to strangle the author ..This is not a virtual reality game anymore. From my perspective Mc is just a stupid person and loves carrying noobies . He helps other people but he doesn't even help his mother who is working really hard just to make his life comfortable. But all Mc do is play games gives unique items to strangers....And he's not even earning money on this game.....In 300 chaps he is still poor idiot old man.. That always relies on his mother . And he just play stupid game.IM WONDERING WHY PEOPLE KEEP VOTING THIS..

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noice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You did a great job with this story I love how you portrayed the main character and I think you did a great job balancing the system this story has a great plot so far and I just really can't wait to see what you do next keep up the great work!

Worst grammer ever. So bad and so constant it makes the MC sound like a mentally ill person. After the first chapter or so I got tired of fixing the grammer issues and stopped reading. If your wrighting ever gets better PLEASE fix the problem chapters.Need to work on past, present, and future tense.Need to work on the him, her, his, hers, he, she stuff.If you want to combine words..... don't(do not) not until you have learned the correct way and the current combinations. Just making up a combo and putting it to work is Not the way to go.You need either an editor or more english lessons.

I wanted to like this novel, and I love the premise, but the MC is too much, he has less character than a snail, less intelligence than a new born bird, less creativity than a vegetative patient, less ambition than a dead frog. He is literally god, yet can't do anything. His powers are wasted on him, and he is too worried on being humanity's saviour with his hero complex than actually working towards his goals, growth or his mission. Thew author is so against edgy MCs he even have the MC say he didn't want to be like the novel's MC which is fine, but instead of doing that, he goes all the way to the other side and become a sucker, he is more worried about improving others lives than enjoying his own life and it gets boring to read him waste his time and abilities thinking how to make philanthropy instead of advancing his cause. With his powers the only thing stopping him of conquering the world in one day and winning the game, is the time it takes for his troops to march, yet, do nothing in his two acres plot not even improve the construction of facilities in his land after the first day.-

"Oh my gosh! I think I just died and went to heaven".

"What!? It's actually opening?! No wonder you are leaving her with me... if it doesn't work out she may be in danger... It would be nice when this war would end soon, it has been going on for too long..." The elder said with a sigh.