A NEET’s Guide to the Parallel World: Healer, the Strongest Cheat?

I've only reached Chapter 5, but the novel has already piqued my interest. I'm eager to see how the protagonist navigates this new world and executes his复仇 plan. It's intriguing that he gained extraordinary powers upon being transported there. I really hope the story gets translated all the way to the end.

I generally refrain from writing extensive scathing reviews, but this one deserves it. However, falloutexile3, you've only read three chapters. How can you judge the quality or flaws of a story based on such a limited sample? Stories, like buildings, require a strong foundation. While the plot may evolve, the initial premise should be sound.

I couldn't continue past Chapter 3 due to the absurdity of the setup. A flawed premise is like a weak foundation; it might seem stable at first, but the more you build upon it, the more it crumbles. Be cautious of potential spoilers related to character motivations.

Spoilers follow:

The main character (MC) being bullied is a common storytelling device, but when combined with being sent to a summoning class, it's less unique. Having someone defend the MC is typical, but the issue arises when the MC refuses to acknowledge any responsibility. Despite being explicitly told to take action, he shifts blame onto others and considers suicide as a solution. It's contradictory; he can't simultaneously blame others for inaction and then reject help. The MC's lack of accountability and self-preservation is glaring.

Next, healers being portrayed as worthless because they prioritize healing over combat prowess is illogical. In any conflict, healers are invaluable, as they save countless lives by preventing deaths from disease and injuries. Dismissing healers as irrelevant is like dismissing logistics in war.

The story's premise suggests that the MC, who doesn't value life, is excluded from the conflict due to his lack of self-preservation. This further undermines any claim to a justifiable vendetta. Blaming others for his problems while refusing to accept responsibility is a victim mentality that makes his revenge motive unconvincing.

In conclusion, my initial optimism for this isekai revenge tale faded after encountering these issues. A solid foundation and consistent character development are crucial for a compelling narrative. Unfortunately, the MC's flawed perspective and lack of self-reflection make it difficult to invest in the story. I'm choosing to stop here, as I fear more inconsistencies might dampen my expectations further. To clarify, I'm not absolving the bully, but the MC's self-absorption and victim mentality undermine any potential redemption arc.

Title: Beware of the "ISEKAI REVENGE" Cliché

It's important not to fall for the premise of many Japanese novels that claim to be revenge stories. Unfortunately, this particular one is guilty of having a subpar plot or character development. Trust me, you'll see why after reading only the first ten chapters.

Imagine coming out of a dungeon and encountering a group. One member suddenly turns hostile despite your peaceful intentions, and you easily overpower them, even choosing to spare them. Then, out of nowhere, they sneakily attack from behind, taunting you. You gain the upper hand and they fear you. Surprisingly, they apologize, claiming it was all a joke with no ill intent. But their body language screams otherwise. They even suggest friendship, which is utterly mocking. How would you react?

Well, our protagonist's response in this story is hilarious - he simply says, "Okay," laughing it off. So, my advice is to steer clear of this novel at once.

The author seems to have taken inspiration heavily from other works, with the protagonist accumulating immense power不知不觉, displaying fear, seeking revenge, being surrounded by one-dimensional supporting characters, featuring stereotypical tropes like attractive noble women, an exotic demon character, and a cute beast girl. I stopped reading after Chapter 60, anticipating the addition of a majestic elf girl in the future. However, what pushed me away was the abrupt shift in the MC's intelligence from above average to below average within just three paragraphs. I've decided to move on.

In my view, this story can be classified as a clichéd isekai trash tale, no matter how I perceive it. However, when compared to other entries in its genre on this platform, it stands out as a decent one. The supporting characters and harem members exhibit plausible behavior and aren't simply mindless followers (except perhaps for a particular child character whose sole purpose seems to be for fan service). The protagonist possesses a distinct personality and motives,尽管它们有缺陷。

I find it puzzling how the story has received such varied reviews. While some criticisms are valid, many appear to stem from readers jumping to conclusions without fully understanding the plot. To address the issue of revenge:

Does the lack of excessive revenge bother you? Here's a spoiler:
He methodically tortures the king and princess with acid, exploiting their past wrongdoings and public resentment, ultimately destroying their castle as an act of vengeance against the kingdom.

Now, if someone feels he's reacting disproportionately to those who ruined his life, I question why it should be seen as unusual. The story does deal with themes like drama, brainwashing, suicide, a twisted personality, and torture, which naturally contribute to a somber atmosphere.

As for my personal engagement, I won't continue reading the untranslated source material since it would consume hours and isn't worth the headache. Nevertheless, I'll follow the manga adaptation as it progresses, and if there's ever an anime adaptation, I'd definitely give it a watch.

I've read the manga, and while it wasn't exceptional, I soldiered on. However, the novel is an entirely different story - it's truly disappointing. The author clearly lacks skills, evident from the start with the main character effortlessly defeating level 500 foes with god-like magic. As the plot unfolds, it becomes apparent that even level 30 threats pose a significant danger, but our protagonist renders everything null and void due to his overwhelming power.

In Arifureta, such an imbalance was somewhat justified by the divine nature of the antagonist and opposing forces. But here, it feels forced, with no real challenge for our主角. What was once a comedic take in Arifureta has transformed into a serious narrative.

The character development is also a letdown. Despite knowing the scale of the world's power dynamics, the MC constantly devalues his own strength and believes his classmates are a threat. This inconsistency persists despite overwhelming evidence to the contrary.

The plot tries to salvage itself initially but crumbles when the MC decides to seek revenge swiftly, effortlessly toppling the villainous royalty. His erratic behavior and illogical decision-making follow, with instances of sudden shifts between rationality and poor choices, like recruiting a deranged princess.

Two specific events pushed me away from the story. One involved the MC's future vision, which felt clichéd and unconvincing. If he had seen the same vision, it would have been redundant, and the concept of future sight was mishandled. The other issue was the excessive use of gender pronouns within the MC's thoughts, which was unnecessary and detracted from the story's impact.

Overall, the novel fails to deliver a compelling narrative or believable characters, marred by poor writing and clichéd tropes.

The progression of power in this setup feels disproportionate and unjustified. If someone amasses immense authority, should it come easily or through diligent effort? One perspective is that it shouldn't; Death March presents a character who gains power effortlessly yet employs his extraordinary abilities ingeniously to overcome challenges, despite his perfectionism. On the other hand, a more traditional narrative arc might involve a hero's gradual growth and struggle, like in Shield Hero, where progress is earned through trials.

However, this particular web novel doesn't adhere to either model. The main character's immaturity and psychological instability are highlighted, along with the arbitrary nature of his power acquisition. The satisfaction derived from his actions is lacking – his vendetta involves indiscriminately eliminating those he perceives as wronging him, relying solely on the gifts he received. In essence, this story combines the worst aspects of Shield Hero with an excessive edge and a lack of its redeeming qualities. Save yourself an hour and skip this one.

The protagonist is exiled following a revelation that people have low expectations for his class. He's whisked away to an unknown location as a means of disposal. His peers mock him for being the class underdog, and in a fit of frustration, he vows revenge. However, his resolve quickly fades, revealing his indecisiveness, typical of a teenager. Disappointed by his lack of assertiveness, his actions are driven by teenage emotions rather than maturity. His history of being bullied leaves him passive, which is evident in various situations. The story drags on, emphasizing his submissive nature and continuous struggles as a "weakling."

The translator's work varies greatly in quality, with some passages seemingly clearer in their original Japanese. There's a lack of proper editing, as evidenced by errors like incorrect use of personal pronouns and occasional autocorrect mishaps. For example, "What the f*ck" became "What the French Toast" and "dumb looking" turned into "dumbledore," suggesting inconsistency rather than translation issues.

Initially, the story had potential with moments of charm, but it took a dark turn. The writing became overly edgy and detracted from the immersion, particularly when plot developments felt forced or poorly executed. A supporting character was abruptly removed because she wouldn't approve of the protagonist's actions, which came across as a transparent character manipulation.

In this alternate world, norms seem non-existent, as everyone is portrayed with mental issues. This exaggeration leaves only a few characters seemingly stable, and the protagonist's character arc includes an unexplained secondary personality that eventually resolves without proper explanation. Many aspects of the story feel unresolved or unnecessarily convoluted.

There are numerous issues, but if you've read this far, I won't force you to continue. The manga adaptation might improve things, but for me, the novel was severely undermined. A complete rewrite of the later parts would likely be necessary to salvage the story.

The character's desire to seek vengeance and gain divine recognition drives her actions, but she frequently forgives those who attempt to harm her, only to be betrayed in return. This sudden shift in trust doesn't align with her initial portrayal as a young person struggling with misfortune and skepticism. The plotline should revolve around her obsession with revenge, not her inexplicable acts of kindness, which seem out of place for a character on this path.

I won't dwell on the main character's flawed personality, as numerous reviews already address that aspect. However, there are two key points I'd like to mention, which aren't widely discussed but significantly impact the narrative:

First, the character's immense power hampers his mental development. Whenever he experiences self-doubt, his abilities falter, forcing him to constantly struggle to refrain from unintentionally hurting others. This could have served as a compelling obstacle for growth, but instead, it becomes a crutch to prevent him from maturing. Additionally, any potential internal conflict is mitigated by his "other half," which conveniently neutralizes the negative effects.

Secondly, the storytelling shifts abruptly without clear explanation after a relatively steady start. Numerous off-screen events are brushed aside with vague statements like "he was out." For instance, the protagonist visits a previously unseen city and meets three dwarven shopkeepers he has no prior connection to, who inexplicably express gratitude to him without providing any context. While it's not the worst story I've come across, it falls short of being exceptional in my opinion.

I'm leaving this comment because the reviews for this novel are absurd. Seriously, how can you review a book based on just a few chapters, like 3, 10, 12, or around 20? It just makes you seem无知.

None of the criticisms hold any weight. The main character (MC) was bullied in school, which led to his suicide at the start. After being reincarnated in another world with classmates who didn't join, he discovers a new sense of hope. However, his class is useless, which becomes a disappointment. Initially, his classmates look down on him for his past suicide, but critics seem to justify ridiculing him as a coward.

The supposed reviewers abandon the story when the MC threatens violence in retaliation, despite his recent trauma. But if they continued reading, they'd see that the MC isn't a cold-blooded killer; he only threatens those who wronged him gravely. He seeks revenge on those responsible for the hero-summoning ritual, which involves heinous acts. His quest for justice is the driving force of the story. Yet, some readers claim he won't seek revenge, which is unfair without giving the narrative more depth.

Frankly, the poor reviews stem from people disliking the MC's suicide, failing to understand his growth and redemption. They can't accept a character who displays vulnerability, particularly one who deals with bullying and depression. But is it so uncommon for someone to struggle to cope?

As for the rating, I'm unsure if a 4/5 is appropriate, but a 1/5 for superficial judgments is definitely unjustified. Give the story a chance beyond the initial chapters.