A Million Years Old System

At the moment the he novel is at about a 100 chapters, and I think it's fair to give it a review now. For starters the novel greatly exceeded my expectations. I expected some more lame-ass faceslapping, but for once I got a decent fan-fic. Yes that's right, fan-fiction. Lets be clear, this sure as hell is written by a football fan as fan-fiction, with tons of known players like fabregas, bale and Walcott making guest appearances, alongside some imaginary players. It isn't bad at all, in fact it's fairly decent, the plot goes on nicely, and it has a nice and peaceful atmosphere. It reminds me a lot of those kingdom-building novels, as that really is what it is. We watch Tang En, or Tony Twain, or TT as I like to call him build a football empire. We watch as he picks up to be pro players, and builds some players himself. It's a light entertaining read with some amount of info-dumping and discoursing upon football tactics.Now on to the bad. Yes there are problems. Any and all conversations feel robotic as ****, and really weird. They don't sound like humans, but more like NPC's interacting. There are equally weird filler arcs, where our main character accidentally kidnaps a loli, and barely evades the FBI. Clearly filler. Character development can get weird at times too. In short the writing is fairly terrible. THe characters themselves however, do have personality. That itself is itneresting, though bound by stereotypes the author believes in.

165 chapters in and still excited to read more. I'm particularly happy with the steady and thought-out progression of the character and his guild. Side characters, including NPCs, are interesting and the world is being built out consistently.

The storyline seems interesting, the book will become more solid if you give the characters more depth. Keep up the good work and the book more unique.

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owemji north i just read the first chapter and you are getting better at writing compared to the other book. not that it isn't good. this book flows much better. i will be looking forward to the reading the rest of the story.

The introduction hooked me, and I got sucked into a world that was wonderfully described by your descriptive language and interesting plotline. Although there is the occasional odd switch to present tense, or the rare typo, it does little to take away from the story.Well done, author.

Oh! My! God!!!!... This is great! I've only read chapter one, my hand were itching to give a review before going back. I love anything action packed and believe me this is overly packed with enough actions. Sierra that poor boy! what he went through broke my heart! Turned into an assassin at such a young age just to live? *sigh*. So I was reading and imagining the best actors that would act this story to perfection if it was made into a movie... Where are the producers and directors!?... I'm so excited for you author, congratulation on this great work of art. Finally I'm missing romance, why? My reading is not complete without a hot romantic... you know what I mean😘😍. I'm shameless...🙈.For you author😘🔥💞

this has a slower, plodding but unrelenting, pace, giving it time to develop a unique MC with a calm philosophical bent. most MC's strive-for power or  their philosophy is based on overcoming hardships. this MC is a true philosopher. no libido dominandi. no Wille zur Macht. refreshing.